Hey, hello there!

I see you on the forums, asking for some critiques, some here I'm. I'm not professional or anything, actually I'm kind of new too, but, I love have feedback, and for that reason I like to do it also.

In this piece;
The line art look so clean. That is very good, and the style of inking give the look of a traditional chinise ilustration. Also the shading in very good, maybe some soft like here and there to create more deep, but is basicly fine.

Know, the elbow of the left hand have a little mistake. For the angle, in fact you will see some part of the elbow below the sword, and in the pic you don't. Also, it could have more realistic and relax position; something like this; [link]

Remember study the position of martial arts for more realistics positions of arms, legs and general body. Some stock research may be helpful on the subjet.

Sorry the crappy english, hope you can undertand.

Keep the great work! :]
I know you will be awasome at this.

- aLex

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And yes, sorry for the crappy english [x

It looks good! Just one suggestion, reconsider the proportions of the hand. The pointer finger is a bit larger in relation to the sword, unless it is meant to be a very narrow sword...

Thanks for the tips! Yeah, I just noticed the wrong positioning after reading your comment! I'll try to fix it as soon as possible ^^!

err...im not sure if the previous people have mentioned it so ye, i'll just ramble on>

er...something about the arms...its not in proportion...you need to add a bit of flesh for the bending part of the arm, you know?

and, you sorta need to work on his face...it doesnt really look like hollow ichigo much XD but it does give a resemblence. i think his body's not wide like that> he's like a football player here XD

but in contrary, its neat, and clean, and great stuff for your digital work. i cant do it -___- so ye, keep up the ace work so far!

homg this is so awsm
i love this pic so much
nice for a 1st pic on da

very nice ^^ <33

great work love the retro feel to it

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Cool job, man.

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